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Hmm, not too bad...

It's kinda short to be a 16 week project, but it looks pretty good. The sound was sparse, but worked well, and the visuals were pleasant enough, if a bit unremarkable. All in all, a pretty good short film.

Nicely done :^)

Degelraadio responds:

Well, I was a bit disorganized, and in truth, I really only had 3 days per week to work on it. But meh, that's all excuses. I honestly agree that it could've been longer, but I'm not the best at writing scripts on the fly, so unfortunately this was all that came of the very short planning period. I appreciate the review though!

Not too bad actually...

I think this is an excellent beginner-type animation. You're on the right track, just keep making art and you'll better as you go along. While the animation was simple, it didn't seem TOO static and stiff. Obviously it wasn't a mind-blowingly epic battle or anything, and sound would've been nice, but for it is, it wasn't bad. I liked it. And word to the wise, don't use misleading thumbnails. You'll get more views, but people will likely rate it lower.

Keep up the good work :^)

StaticSkull responds:

Thank you! :)

Keep trying, almost there!

I felt like this could've been really nice. It has an interesting style, and I feel like a neat story could've been told, but ultimately a whole lot of nothing happens. I'm not hating on you, and I applaud you for trying. I actually thought the animation was nice, though, a bit slow at times. You've got something that a lot of pro animators and artists don't have -- charm. Definitely lots of heart put into it. Don't let haters bring you down. Keep on trying. Personally, I would work on adding sound and custom music, and maybe voice work. If you ever need music, you're free to use anything of mine.

PS Mischief Makers movie please! I'd love to see what you do with that. Shake shake!

AreteG responds:

Thanks Bertn, and when I get better with my editing I might have to take you up on that offer. Because your music sounds really good, Busted Bay is my personal favorite of your songs.

Also. I would really love to do a Mischief Makers movie, maybe even one where Marina crosses over into other video game universes so she could "Shake" up there games a bit! xD

Strangely stylish. It's bizarre and hypnotic, in the best of ways of course. I won't be forgetting this any time soon. Hey, imagine if Jet-Chicken was a 22 minute cartoon series. This would be the absolute perfect intro for the show. What would it be about? Who knows, but I'd like to see it. That'd be so cool. Anyway, good job making this. Looks like you really know what you're doing : )

Mightydein responds:

I've remember watching a lot of your pervious work and writing reviews too.

I actually hidden a subtle reference to Yonder Ho within this movie.

I hidden pete somewhere in this movie.

Did you spot him?

I'm very pleased that you enjoyed my flash movie.

This is horrible! It's so dark and demented. It's morbid and it's weird.

Personally I don't like this video, at all. It's just not for me, but I won't give it a low rating. It is well made and has a dark and spooky atmosphere to it that some people will like. 3 Stars : )

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